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同等学力英语备考方法の范文讲解如何拓展写作思路

  新阳光同等学力写作班已开课!部分同学在学习的过程中可能会遇到这样那样的疑问,为提高学习效率,新阳光同等学力英语教研组老师整理了关于同等学力英语的写作思路,希望可以帮到大家!


 如何扩展思路??


  以议论文三段式为例,一般的模板框架中,第一段和第三段模板的句式可以套用的内容较多,而第二段着重个人观点的表达,这个也是很多学员较头痛的问题。


如何针对一个话题进行表达思路的扩展?下面新阳光将以学员的作文题进行分析:


 议论文大致的写作步骤:

   一、审题 (重中之重)

   二、结合标题和引导描述分析主题

   三、拟大纲→套用模板→思路扩展

   四、检查


  作文练习一

  Directions: Write a composition in no least than 150 words on the topic: Do You Prefer to Live in Big City or Small Town?

  Recently, there are an increasing number of people living in a small town. Some people enjoy living in the town, while others like living in the city. Which do you prefer?


  标题提到:“Do Your Prefer to Live in Big City or Small Town?” “你比较喜欢住在大城市还是小城镇?”


  利用主题和主题描述套用模板,那这篇文章可以选用单边论述也可以用双边论述;比如,标题是city 和town 那双边论述就是既讲city 也讲town的利或弊;而单边论述的话只选其中之一讲即可。范文选用双边论述:套用模板-city and town利弊分析-个人观点总结


  范文


Do You Prefer to Live in Big City or Small Town?

标题抄写完整,切记不要更改标题,题目没有标题时可以不用写


  首段模板套用:When it comes to living in a city or a small town, some people believe that living in the city has many benefits, and it is often argued by other people that living in a small town is much happier than living in a city. There is probably some truth in both statements, but I tend to live in the city.


  第二段:(利弊分析-双边论证)Generally speaking, the advantages of living in the city can be seen clearly in the following respects.

  To begin with, (正面观点一)it is well-known that the city has a variety of public services and facilities. For instance, people in city are easy to get to the shopping malls and public libraries.

  In addition, (正面观点二)usually, a city is equipped with convenient transportation systems, which make people travel long distances easily.

  And finally, (正面观点三)there are much more job opportunities in a city than in a small town.

  However, just as the proverb goes, every coin has two sides. There is no exception to the above discussed issue of living in a city or a small town.


  On the one hand, (反面观点一)people can have much bigger space in a small town than a city due to the cost of housing;

  on the other hand, (反面观点二)a small town is not as crowded as in a city.


  总结:第二段,在模板的基础上,除了课程提到从宏观上或微观上进行自我观点的表述外,也可以从以下几个方面来扩展思路:


  一、社会公众的角度

  如:正面观点一:(公众服务+公众设施): It is well-known that the city has a variety of public services and facilities.

  正面观点二:(公共交通):usually, a city is equipped with convenient transportation systems, which make people travel long distances easily.

  反面观点二: (人口)A small town is not as crowded as in a city.


  二 、个人的角度

  正面观点三:(个人工作机会):There are much more job opportunities in a city than in a small town.

  反面观点一 : (个人住房)People can have much bigger space in a small town than a city due to the cost of housing.


  三、经济角度

  The cost of living in the big city is much higher than that in the small town.


  四、教育

  There are a lot of educational resources in the big city, for example excellent teachers and schools.


  大家还可以从不同的角度进行扩展,比如科技角度......


  本篇范文较长,主要是将完整结构和观点呈现给大家,而实际写作过程中,大家可根据自己的观点论述,在理解模板的内容进行内容删减,字数达到150字即可。


  第三段:个人观点的总结:Based on the above discussion, they both have advantages and disadvantages. Personally, I would like to live in a city because the public services and facilities enrich my part-time life. I visit the parks and concerts frequently. What’s more, people in the city are from all over the country with different cultures, and I can learn from them and broaden my horizons.

 

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